Copy and paste what I said before you submitted...
I hate those captions... they make it look like the ground is making expressions. You COULD'VE at least make that "earthquake" effect when the camera moves a little when an explosion happens or when in this case, Swing your arms from side to side! falls head-first when his hat got stolen. EDIT: Oh, now I did, because of frickin' dial-up.
You need to shorten the 1-UP part and cut out the Luigi parts, because that wasen't funny. I don't know what happened with that bullet bill. But you can keep in the last part. It was good, but you NEED, or should I say, SHOULD'VE took my advice for things above. The only reason it got Mario collection and a decent score is because of good animation and cliche plot, but since you didn't listen to me, you fail at life.